Friday 6 May 2016

Give up!

I wrote a new song about giving up just for fun.

If the odds you're facing
Aren't to your liking,
If you're wondering why you're trying,
Just give up!

If you're trying to kill a tiger
Who is in a state of extreme hunger,
The thought may just linger,
To give up!

You don't have to do everything,
Only some specific things,
It's all up to you,
Whether to do them or admit defeat!
There's nothing wrong in calling it a day,
You do it if you may!
Just give up!
Admit defeat!
You can stop!
Admit you've been beat!

2 comments:

  1. This is a very thought provoking poem indeed. Even though you should usually not give up easily, it is true that it is also important to recognize when continued effort is only futile. Giving up in that situation can even help conserve your energy to fight back later. Excellent job!

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  2. This is a very thought provoking poem indeed. Even though you should usually not give up easily, it is true that it is also important to recognize when continued effort is only futile. Giving up in that situation can even help conserve your energy to fight back later. Excellent job!

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